Dear Laura Lucas,
I just read your blog which provided an easy read. There are
some minor errors that have to do with
English “other companies depend in their collaboration” should be depend ON.
Etc. But they are just minor errors so if take the time to read your post again
you will pick them out easily.
Furthermore the blog is incomplete as you also mention.
Point three on how other coordination mechanisms could improve this is not yet
dealt with. In answering the second question on diffusing sustainability
criteria I would elaborate more on the diffusion part as now it is only
mentioned in the question, but does not come back in the actual answer. Here
you could talk on how measures etc. get spread throughout the supplier and how
they trickle down from the top management to the work floor.
You wrote that it didn’t became clear to you how Nokia can
check if their suggestions were taken into consideration, but as audits are
recurring events for sure the supplier will try to, before each audit, implement
several of their clients suggestions. If this is done right or sufficiently is
another question, but therefor we have audits to check upon this progress. Moreover
Nokia also discussed in the end that it is a long process that needs time.
Overall my impression of the blog is that it could all be
formulated a bit more sharp and concise and that of course it should be
finished. In the first part all elements are already in place so that should
not be too much work, in the second and third part there are things missing
still.
Good luck!
Jody Milder
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