Review of Thodoris Spathas
Hi there,
I really enjoyed reading your post as I had no idea that
they are experiencing a similar situation as in Berlin with the Tempelhof.
Interesting to see also that where in Berlin basically they seem to continue
the status quo whereas in Athens they try to move forward. The way in which
this happens in terms of process can be debated of course.
Some very practical comments are that it is recommendable to
read your blog once more you would pick out several type-o’s where the’s became
they’s and those sort of things. Furthermore I would recommend shortening a few
very large sentences in order to make these easier to read.
In terms of content I would suggest you to take the Ostrom
framework and use it to structure the text. I can now see the different
elements, but it nonetheless could be sharper cut out so the reader gets less
confused. I think all the information is there, it just needs some shuffling up
into the shape of the framework provided by Ostrom.
Well that was it, sorry I was late with providing feedback,
but better late than never I hope.
Keep blogging,
Review of Chloë Lejeune
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